Literary Device Evaluation

Interpretive Project: Literary Device Evaluation
By Sonja Munson

     “Ships at a distance have every man’s wish on board.”  In the very first line of her novel Their Eyes Were Watching God, Zora Neale Hurston uses the literary device of metaphor. This thought of a distant ship holding the fulfilment of our wishes and desires is a striking introduction to a novel which was deeply personal to Hurston. She was a very expressive author, using metaphor generously throughout her writing. In this evaluation, I will give five examples of metaphor found in the text and explain their significance in regards to the main character, Janie.

     In the fourth chapter of the novel, Janie is unhappy with her arranged marriage to Logan Killicks, and Joe Starks has convinced her to run away and marry him instead. After they are married, Janie believes “From now on until death she was going to have flower dust and springtime sprinkled over everything” (32). This fanciful picture reflects on how Janie is looking forward to her life with Joe as the fulfillment of her dreams. Since she was a young girl, she saw love and marriage as a beautiful thing displayed in the way the bees brought the flowers to full bloom. Eventually, when Janie is unsatisfied in her marriage to Joe, the reasons are understandable. The lack of flower dust and springtime in their relationship leaves her discontent.

     As Joe becomes more and more suppressive of Janie’s independent spirit, she is upset with him but does not express her frustration. In chapter six, Joe places the responsibility of helping run the store on Janie’s shoulders, and she has struggles with certain aspects of the job. “But Joe kept saying that she could do it if she wanted to and he wanted her to use her privileges. That was the rock she battered against” (54). Hurston helps readers visualize Janie’s struggle against Joe’s expectations by describing them as a rock which she is beaten against. It is as if Janie is a powerful wave crashing onto rocky shore.

     Joe and Janie’s relationship continues to go downhill as Joe’s health begins to decline. Janie goes to him and confronts him, telling him that he has changed since she ran away with him, and his love of self has left no room for anyone else. As she speaks, he is caught in a last struggle: “The icy sword of the square-toed one had cut off his breath and left his hands in a pose of agonizing protest. Janie gave them peace on his breast…” (87). Hurston personifies Death as a square-toed being, unstoppable and all-powerful. The metaphor she uses here about Joe’s breath being “cut off” provides a vivid image of the suddenness of death. The sound of Joe’s last gasp echoes in readers’ ears as Janie contemplates her dead husband’s face.

     Janie gives Joe an extravagant funeral service in chapter nine. Her inner response to his death is not that of a grieving, devastated widow, as society might expect. Janie dresses in mourning, but she is not by any means overcome with grief. She has come to terms with Jody’s death and accepted it, and Hurston explains “She did not reach outside for anything, nor did the things of death reach inside to disturb her calm” (88). Janie does not sink into death’s despair or let its grief inside her. The way Hurston words this metaphor displays how Janie protects herself from sorrow by avoiding violent reactions of any kind. She does not reach out and grieve, and in turn death’s pain does not penetrate into her heart.

     As Janie gets used to running the store and living alone, she happens to meet a young man who goes by the name of Tea Cake. After only one evening spent together, they become good friends. Tea Cake encourages Janie to play checkers with him, something Joe would have frowned upon. They enjoy making small talk and Tea Cake helps Janie close up the store at the end of the night. As he walks her home, Janie realizes that she does not need to be afraid of him having ill intentions towards her. “Tea Cake wasn’t strange. Seemed as if she had known him all her life” (99). At the end of the chapter, Hurston uses another metaphor to describe Janie’s emotions about this new relationship: “So she sat on the porch and watched the moon rise. Soon its amber fluid was drenching the earth, and quenching the thirst of the day” (99). The picture of moonlight quenching the thirst of the day reflects how Janie feels fulfilled after she meets Tea Cake. She sees the possibility of him filling the desires she has had ever since she was a young girl.


     Throughout all of these examples we see Hurston’s mastery of creating vivid images and showing us emotions through words by using metaphor in her writing. In Their Eyes Were Watching God, metaphor plays a big part in aiding the readers’ understanding of the moods, emotions, and feelings of Janie’s character. 

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